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The Alien and the Jeweler
Illana shrieked, but she had the presence of mind to run to the outdoor shed and grab her metal rake. It was the kind with heavy iron teeth that made it almost useless for leaf-removal because the leaves got caught in the tines. She raised it above her head, fueled by adrenaline, and prepared to bring all its force to bear on whatever wobbled inside the metal lozenge.
The Sea Witch
She was but a few feet from them now. Her dress, which looked thin, tattered, and out of place, fluttered in the light breeze.